Photoshoot tryout 1 Hello peeps,
been awhile since I last posted here.
Just tried out a make-shift photoshoot for a school assignment in my room(with a study lamp and my dad's umbrella and a very tired boyfriend haha!)
These are post edited photos,
C&C are most welcomed! :)
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mafie- 09-06-2008
if only i got that kind of body. :lol:
Ratnor- 09-06-2008
if only i got that kind of body. :lol:
if u have that kind of body then u wouldnt be the mafie that we all know and lovee.... AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWW.......... :wink:
i use to have that kind of body.. pls believe me... :shock:
asfeexiated- 09-06-2008
OMG RATNOR HAHAA. Anyway the last photo's edited nicely, it's better than the original because it focuses on your model alone ;)
cgmx2- 09-06-2008
if only i got that kind of body. :lol:
i juz wan a hugh pumped up chest
so tt i can paste stickers and write words on them
caljoephua- 09-06-2008
mick, should paste "cgmx2" there. LOL
Valentine- 09-06-2008
haha thanks guys for the cute comments.
any ideas how the lighting and stuff can be improved to have the "studio-like" effect? ;)
machiavellian- 09-06-2008
the lighting for the 1st one is good, but the second is dull
the face is not in proper focus...images are too soft for my liking
and more can be done on the edited one as there are alot of flaws
caljoephua- 09-06-2008
in true CS style,
try and eliminate the shadows. XD
Being in a studio gives you so much space and freedom, dont be worried to take your time and set up the lights.
One more table would have helped if it were placed on the subject's right.
being said, pun Intended!
sumlom- 09-06-2008
i would prefer shadows. like harsh lighting for the dramatic effect. so 1st one seems good to me.
i dont really like the edited one. hair is edited till it merges with the background, looks very odd.
my own opinion only la. not very pro also. lol.
sheree- 09-06-2008
i feel that there shld be more focus on the face. don't cut away the hands.. the third one's okay just need more focus.
considering ur "studio set up", not bad!
ranon- 09-07-2008
i juz wan a hugh pumped up chest
so tt i can paste stickers and write words on them
my fayverrret movie is love actually, cos got hugh grant.
echeleon- 09-07-2008
I like the last photo, interesting shadows falling on his face and fading into the background.
Your highlights are burning out all the details in the bright white portions.
If you're using Levels on photoshop, pull your blacks and white in till where the details start (denoted by vertical black lines). You can pull it further in but not too much. Also because you're shooting on white, the white calculations from the wall may get mixed up with your highlights on your boyfriend, so might be a good idea to mask him out on a seperate layer, then work on the tones in Levels. Hope this helps. :)
I shot with a touch light and umbrella once too in a very dark place. :?
Valentine- 09-07-2008
wow thanks for the quick replies!
off topic: jason!!
gilaman- 09-07-2008
nth wrong with shadows. but they are all not focus.
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